Answers to "What's wrong with this Canadian's article on the Singapore Food Safari?"
This is the follow-up to an earlier post.
1. The caption to the first photo: no, Arab Street is not where most Singaporean Muslims call home.
2. The abtract: "Tour an easy way to digest great neighbourhoods"--a "tourist tour that's easy to digest" might pass for acceptable usage, but digesting neighbourhoods, no matter how great they are, is another thing altogether.
3. Malays are Malays, Malaysian are Malaysians...
4. It's Geylang Lorong, not "Gaylang Loring".
5. "A heaping plate of beef noodles" (taking "heaping" as an adjective) sounds strange.
1. The caption to the first photo: no, Arab Street is not where most Singaporean Muslims call home.
2. The abtract: "Tour an easy way to digest great neighbourhoods"--a "tourist tour that's easy to digest" might pass for acceptable usage, but digesting neighbourhoods, no matter how great they are, is another thing altogether.
3. Malays are Malays, Malaysian are Malaysians...
4. It's Geylang Lorong, not "Gaylang Loring".
5. "A heaping plate of beef noodles" (taking "heaping" as an adjective) sounds strange.
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